Day: June 29, 2023

This week for writing we learnt about suspenseful writing and how we can write a suspenseful beginning by using imagery and dialogue.

Suspense is a feeling of excitement or uncertainty about what will happen next in the movie/story.

Imagery means using your imaginations when the movie/story describes something with out using an picture.

Dialogue is a conversation between two or more characters.

I enjoyed learning about suspenseful beginnings.

I need to approve more on is writing better dialogues.

I approved on was adding imargey, dialogues, & making it suspense.

This week for Reading we had to solve a Mystery at Wharepuni Estate.

First I had to search other and easer words using the site called word hippo.

Then when I was done I had to read the whole paragraph that was high lighted with the words I had searched for its easer version.

Next my partner and I had to connect the clue in the crime scene from our reading slide to each suspect and then write for each suspect thier motive then our alibi.

Lastly we had to pick our suspect then write our reasons for the suspect we picked before we present it to our whole reading group

This week for inquiry we leanrt about the matariki stars.

First we picked one star from our inquiry slide.

Then we picked one of the following things to make a DLO/Slides of after we picked one of the stars.

Lastly I finished my DLO about Ururangi and one of the following things I made a DLO of was how did Moari sailed their boats.

What I did good at was sticking to the topi waht I didn’t do good at was adding more info.

I enjoyed making a DLO of this star.